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The First Time I Saw You
Contributed by
black_angel
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:00:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I felt pressure on my chest
My heart jumped to and fro
You were the best of the best
I wanted everyone to know
Your smile lit the world
My eyes never left your side
My stomach flitted and twirled
You were so handsome I cried
Instantly I fell in love
All my senses quickly washed away
I floated lightly as a dove
I hoped to be with you one day
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2004-07-29 08:00:52]
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Re: The First Time I Saw You
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:06:59 AM AEST
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nicely put for him. good write
Kimberly :) |
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Re: The First Time I Saw You
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:38:34 AM AEST
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Awww this is such a sweet and loving write,
pixie xx |
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