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As it is
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:08:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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My eyes are wet and sticky from the tears I cried last night
There was nothing hopeful that I could see in sight
Now is it just my vision, or do things seem very dimming
Has the sun gone down and is all I can bring myself to do is frown
Well dare me isnt a shame,
That my lifetime problems werent like a game,
A game that you could just switch off or a record that you could change
So that all of lifes little problems, you could re-arrange
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SweetRhythm
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2004-07-29 08:08:09]
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Re: As it is
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:37:09 AM AEST
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Awwww *hugs you*
Sorry you feel like this.... a very powerful and emotional write.
pixie xx |
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Re: As it is
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by MomentInTime on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:31:39 PM AEST
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| Ahhhhhhhh but to have a magic wand..... :o)x |
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