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Tidal Wave
Contributed by
Crys
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Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:40:00 AM in AEST
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Like a fload gate, I hold back rushing waters.
An emotional tidal wave that tries,
ever so hard, to break through.
I may bend and heave against the force,
but I have yet to break.
My head swivels as the water rises in me.
My heart floats, not knowing how to swim,
but praying to be rescued.
It's all so maddening, can I be saved?
Can I be scooped from the troubled waters and given mouth to mouth if I should panic?
Copyright ©
Crys
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2002-10-29 09:40:00]
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Re: Tidal Wave
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:45:03 AM AEST
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| i have no idea what this could mean, the mystery of it all is quite intruiging. it's applicable to damn near any crisis! nice write! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: Tidal Wave
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:58:54 AM AEST
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I just feel like saying
it's okay to cry. This is sad
Great write. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Tidal Wave
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 03:04:51 PM AEST
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We will rescue you, just keep on writing. My IM address is on my page, so just IM me if you need to talk... I may be young, but I'm a good listener!!! And like Oreo said, it's always ok to cry. Sometimes letting go of the flood gates is what you need to do.
Ginnie |
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