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Just for me
Contributed by
trustisajoke
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:06:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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When tomorrow starts youll see
this life i live wasnt meant for me
you find me hanging by a rope
and the note will say i lost all hope
you run home and cry in your bed
suddenly wishing you were dead
but when you dream you dream of me
and up in heaven if where you want to be
every minute you live you think of me
and how our love used to be
you tell the police that you didnt know
you had now idea it was my time to go
you say that the pain i endured
by anyone but me could never be cured
you thought you were over me
but your pain deep inside, no one could see
from where i am i see you hang from a rope
and the note i read says you lost all hope
and when tomorrow starts theyll see
you hung yourself in rememberence of me
-T.S-
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trustisajoke
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Re: Just for me
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by TheRaven on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:47:03 PM AEST
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Excellent poem...i love the plot. i still think suicide is really selfish, but you put it into a great perspective. awesome job keep it up
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Re: Just for me
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:49:01 PM AEST
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wow!!!! this is very good yet very sad. i'm sorry u feel this way if this is the way u truely feel. i am here if u ever want to talk. good poem keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Just for me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:22:18 PM AEST
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wow a very powerful poem....well done on this write,
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Re: Just for me
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:27:58 PM AEST
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| Excellent piece of work. I really liked this. --the Moth |
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Re: Just for me
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:41:51 PM AEST
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this is really sad...but an excellent write!!...amazing job
Lots of Love
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