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Voice in my head
Contributed by
trustisajoke
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:38:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The voice inside my head
whispers i should die
it tells me that im worthless
and my life is one big lie
it tells me to get it over with
and kill myself today
it tells me that these pills will take my pain away
this voice screams in my head
that i am dead inside
it tells me that it laughed at me everynight i cried
it tells me that im worthless and i should go through with it this time
it tells me that im stupid and no one will ever care
it says i should go for it sence it is only fair
the voice inside my head is driving me insane
the voice inside my head helped me end this pain
-T.S-
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trustisajoke
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Re: Voice in my head
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by princess8383 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:41:41 PM AEST
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I really hope whatever it is in life that is haunting you so, will release you from this depression and bring joy to your life.
With love
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Re: Voice in my head
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:42:20 PM AEST
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makes sence literatly,we all well atleast i have a voice inside my head that tells me things like that and it insists that i can do something about the pain,so honestly i feel ur feelings,but just remember ur heart over powers ur head,follow ur heart,awsome poem,keep up the great writes
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Re: Voice in my head
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by trustisajoke on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:43:40 PM AEST
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| My poems arent about me, they just stay in my head till i write them down |
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Re: Voice in my head
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:46:52 PM AEST
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great write...
pixie xx |
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Re: Voice in my head
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by cauchy3 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:54:04 PM AEST
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| If you wish your opponent suffer when they laugh then you cry to your pills |
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Re: Voice in my head
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by Babigurl on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:36:21 PM AEST
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| Beautiful deep poem i can relate so much |
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Re: Voice in my head
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:05:05 PM AEST
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I can relate so well to this poem...it is a great write...excellent job
Lots of Love
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