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Lost
Contributed by
stubbo87
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I feel like I am at a piano recital
Soft, pretty music
But I need a subtitle
Im lost
I stand here teary-eyed
Frozen in time
Dont know what to do, petrified
Im lost
Im not my usual extrovert
Feeling nothing inside
Which makes me feel like dirt
Im lost
Am I nave?
Everyone bawls,
Why cant I grieve?
Im lost
My brain decided to disconnect
Stuck in one place
Totally wrecked
Im lost
Memory is like an heirloom
Treasured but misplaced
As I stand at this tomb
Im lost
I feel like Im in a war zone
Bombarded and confused
Staring in disbelief at the name on the tombstone
Im lost
Without you
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2004-07-29 19:12:53]
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Re: Lost
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:18:17 AM AEST
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Good write.
'I feel like I am at a piano recital
Soft, pretty music
But I need a subtitle
I’m lost…'
I really liked those lines.
You've expressed the shock and pain of losing a loved one very well. It's simply written, yet deep and emotional. Nice.
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Re: Lost
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by amber1988 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:24:32 AM AEST
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| i liked this one. it really sums up wat its like to lose sumone who is really close to u. |
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