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undecided
Contributed by
hannahbanana
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:50:29 PM in AEST
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undecided
there's the door
but still there's a force
that pulls me home.
i love that i love you
but you leave me wanting more
and i can't quite figure
if you are melting snow now
whether my weathered heart
can stand to understand
you are a gentle breeze of persuasion
that whispers
DO NOT LET ME GO TONIGHT
so until tomorrow's uncertainty
i love you indefinitely
until its definitely maybe.
Copyright ©
hannahbanana
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2004-07-29 19:50:29]
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Re: undecided
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:29:51 AM AEST
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Interesting poem.
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Re: undecided
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by Gentledove on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:12:30 PM AEST
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love will do that to you. Make you feel undecided and such. nice write.
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