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Hey dad
Contributed by
savedbydeath
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:04:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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how can i miss you?i don't even know you how can you miss me?you don't even know me you're not even a man how can you be a father why do i even bother?i'm just wasten time
you have problems,you were never theres for your kids,when kids of my own come i'll never leave their sides,so many things your gonna miss out,so many things we're gona need
hey dad,how can we start all over,please look at me,i hope you remember me,your only daughter stands before you,will you even realize me,do you truly love me dearly,i highly doubt it,your not a man
oh god,i amonly young,what did i do to deserve this will i ever know how to forget him,hes not a father hes not a man,oh god,i gave him many chances many that he took and wasted,oh god
a man i never knew,a man whos not even a man we can never start over,your not a man,your not my father,i don't know you,how do you make it through all them long nights thinking of us,i doubt you think of us
thinking of you makes me so mad,but i'm quite glad you're not here making our lifes miserable like yours get out of my head,why won't i just die,when you look at me you look disapointed,is there something wrong?
hey dad,how can we start all over,please look at me,i hope you remember me,your only daughter stands before you,will you even realize me,do you truly love me dearly,i highly doubt it,your not a man
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Re: Hey dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by cheech on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:12:53 PM AEST (User
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i can really relate to this,my father is here on earth but i feel like i'm on jupiter,cause he pretty much deserted me,but hell i don't have to put up with him and its his loss,this poem is great i could not do it any better myself
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Re: Hey dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by beatleman on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:20:10 PM AEST (User
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i love it. its really a well done poem. I feel for you and i might know a fraction of what ur going through by my own home life. great job on the poem |
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Re: Hey dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by MomentInTime on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:57:05 PM AEST (User
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Each of us is born free of fear, guilt, hate, anger, etc.. To be carrying any of these means to be carrying a burden which belongs to someone else; to release them and return them back to the ones who own them is a step towards freeing oneself, thus becoming the person one is. When you have children, may you have the strength to not pass on the same burdens which you now carry. oxo |
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