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The Carnival Of Freaks
Contributed by
Ripper_Something_Unusual
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:27:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am a slave to a system,
A world that does not want me,
In peace of death I am reborn,
Into the aftermafth of life,
I must have failed my abortion,
I must have failed my childhood,
I must have failed my school,
I must have failed my job,
But i can still taste hope,
Its a 45 caliber lead injection,
A bullet proof grin,
Ther is no end to the noise,
There is no end to the pollution,
I sit and waste my life,
And I lay feeling repressed and weak,
And you my friend are the same,
Were all just victims,
Doomed to spend our days on show,
In the carnival of freaks.
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Re: The Carnival Of Freaks
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by MomentInTime on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:33:23 PM AEST
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| hmmmmmmm whatever moments of doubts I have, I've yet to consider myself a loser or doomed in some carnival of freaks. I read this somewhere -> I rather die on my feet than live on my knees. Thought to pass this on in case the light switch is not so easy to find. :o) |
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Re: The Carnival Of Freaks
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by Alina on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:41:00 PM AEST
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| WOW!! A lot of feeling and a lot of depth. GREAT WRITE. Although, I've felt some what like this before, I hope things change for you on your perspective of life. Best of Wishes. |
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Re: The Carnival Of Freaks
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:43:05 AM AEST
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yes I have been here before, but I found the strength to pull myself away from this way of thinking... I think you are too hard on yourself, I really hope thta one day you can let go of all your pain and hurt and begin to enjoy the world around you,
takecare
pixie xx
great write, very deep and dark..... |
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