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I Miss you!!
Contributed by
Peanutzz
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:51:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I rember your tears From Hopes and Fears
You Smile Stays In my heart Even though we now are apeart
Voice echos in my head, and Knowing your gone makes me not wanna get out of Bed.
My voice is shakey and my head hangs low, The tears in my eyes wont stop but grow.
Our long talks Replay in my mind, Knowing you were just gunna leave was it a waste of time
Please take my heart and keep it close to yours, We are running out of time like water seaping out of a hand and on to floors.
I'll Miss you
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Peanutzz
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2004-07-29 20:51:13]
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Re: I Miss you!!
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:10:13 PM AEST
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| needs work on grammar, and consistent capitalization. besides that, good write. |
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