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Stranger
Contributed by
Living_In_my_dream
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 11:33:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Across the milky way, sculptured of mortal hands
You found me across the sea of jolly people,
On this merry day.
I caught your stare,
I held your gaze,
And time seemingly stood still.
Into your eyes I behold,
Deluged with abundance of soul found within,
Fleeting wisp of fragility too can be seen.
Attached to your soothing familiarity,
Of your ease and affability.
Though only a transient acquaintance,
I dreamt of knowing you since birth of time.
Eternity,
Broken by your smile,
Of one beaming with such blithe,
Induced the proudest star to humility.
Blushing the pinkest,
I could only requite with the hint of a smile.
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Re: Stranger
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:30:39 AM AEST
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a beautiful write...
pixie xx |
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Re: Stranger
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by rugby_player on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:29:31 AM AEST
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| ahhhhhhhhhhhhh big words..lol......but seriously great job.........i had to use a dictionary to figure out what some of the words meant so thanks for making me smarter.......BUT I LOVED IT |
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Re: Stranger
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:30:58 PM AEST
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Eternity,
Broken by your smile,
Of one beaming with such blithe,
Induced the proudest star to humility.- wow wow wow! deep... through the pain of it all its the hardest events in our life that truly build our strongest character traits. another strong, amazing poem (should we expect anything less from you?) A+++++
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Re: Stranger
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by inspiredhearts on
Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 05:39:56 PM AEST
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| beautiful |
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