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Deaths Grasp
Contributed by
Knowledge
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Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I found you,
You were more dead than alive.
It took all my power to stop your death.
As my powers failed,
You drew a breath.
Your hand clasped mine,
And our souls intertwined.
Copyright ©
Knowledge
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2002-10-29 12:00:00]
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Re: Deaths Grasp
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:05:41 PM AEST
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The visions your giving me
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Deaths Grasp
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by Bitterkel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:38:58 PM AEST
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such powerful words put into a few lines..awesome
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Re: Deaths Grasp
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by aernby on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 02:36:31 PM AEST
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strong, well written. good job
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