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the appointment
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
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The Appointment
Tried to unfurl my poetic wings
this morning but couldnt think
of nothing other than seeing my
doctor this afternoon. Hes so
serious lips curling down like he
has found something in my innards
too disgusting for words.
To day he wants me to walk on
a thread-mill to see how fit Im
Oscar Wilde did that and wrote
a ballad about it, Im modest
fearing only a flashing light so
bright that lives streets will have
neither illusion nor shadows.
A petrified blaze so intense that
roses will be transparent yet
unseen a contour less world where
oil wells will gush covering seas
with a carpet of shining rainbow
slushcant tell the doctor that
hell only give me a pill for it.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
... [
2002-10-29 12:20:00]
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Re: the appointment
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 02:20:25 PM AEST
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| a wonderful write. i feel the emotions dripping off of this |
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Re: the appointment
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 09:41:47 AM AEST
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oi pa... well, stay strong. hard as it may be
good write, thou a bit down... kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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