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First touch
Contributed by
little_genna
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:25:46 AM in AEST
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We told each other we would never fall for one another,
We should never become lovers.
Then you tell me you do really love me.
This does not bother me,
Though I love you just as a mate,
Yet now at a later date.
I have become hugely shocked.
My heart has become unlocked.
I to hear myself uttering the words I love you.
Yet it is our friendship that we value.
Mark you are a wonderful mate,
May be you would even make a much better date.
I hope this is not too much,
I just can’t wait to feel our first touch.
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Re: First touch
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:53:19 AM AEST
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Awww this is so sweet.... Cherish your friendship.... and take things slowly.....
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Jenni |
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Re: First touch
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by srsuckow on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:57:55 AM AEST
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| Moving beyond friendship is scary (and exciting)!! Good luck! |
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Re: First touch
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by Britty on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:18:51 AM AEST
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| aww this is really good! i loved it |
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Re: First touch
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:47:48 AM AEST
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Very sweet poem... You should let him read it. take care...
Kimberly :) |
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Re: First touch
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:24:48 PM AEST
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Awwww I wish you and Mark all the best, but take baby steps, dont rush things and they will work out fine....*hugs you*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: First touch
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:17:11 PM AEST
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awww... so sweet!!! best wishes to you:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: First touch
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by Snapz on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:46:13 PM AEST
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| huni dont worry about it effecting our friendship if we dont want it to it wont, we've been close since we started speaking an although i never thought ud feel like this or tht i wud im fine with it and woteva u want 2do from now is fine by me. Thnx 4 tellin me now though an im glad its artistic rather than just said i always prefer ur writin im poetry form its relaxing. Neway no 2 the point i love u an i love this poem btw wot are we doing about tht whole marriage thingy tht we went on about ? love mark (Snapz) |
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