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Forbidden Ways
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:00:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I feel as though Im talking in my sleep
Because if your there your in way to deep
Im running in the wind,
And feel as though Im just being skinned
Im walking in the dark and if you are there you really dont care
I may as well be talking a different language
Because anything I say, you just cant manage
I know its your hobby to go against the grain
But does that really mean you have to stick me out in the rain
Are you a clown or do you mean to be funny
Because you are utterly ridiculous that you get kicks and highs out of your insensitive lies
Youre a joke, thats all you are
And anyone who takes you seriously, their in to far
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SweetRhythm
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2004-07-30 09:00:51]
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Re: Forbidden Ways
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:02:11 AM AEST
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| Very good write, very emotional. |
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Re: Forbidden Ways
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:26:01 AM AEST
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Very original. It's good to get how your feeling out. Nice write.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Forbidden Ways
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:22:05 PM AEST
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Awwww Corinna I am sorry you feel like this *hugs*
great write,very well expressed
pixie xx |
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