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My Nightmare
Contributed by
Daywalker2231
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:04:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sitting here on this cold and lonely night
Wondering why we had to fight
You left without saying a word
Thought that you did, but nothing was really heard
Woke up the next morning hope to see your face
Looked around and you were nowhere in this place
The phone rings hoping it to be you
Police tell me they had some bad news
Now I wake up to a sound of a voice
And now I realized I didnt have to make that choice
I grab you and hold you and love you in my arms
And whisper to you, I hope nothing causes you harm
As we lay here on this cold and lonely night
I never want you out of my sight
Thinking to myself, that was a really bad fright
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Daywalker2231
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2004-07-30 13:04:22]
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Re: My Nightmare
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:10:46 PM AEST
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Lovely write...deep and captivating....... I loved it...
Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni |
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Re: My Nightmare
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:39:55 PM AEST
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yes, very deep and a truly great dark write,
WELCOME :)
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Re: My Nightmare
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:57:24 PM AEST
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Very strong words, and write. I liked it alot.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: My Nightmare
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:58:51 PM AEST
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very well expressed,the words really captured the emotions
great write
~vermillion~ |
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Re: My Nightmare
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 09:02:13 AM AEST
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| Good write |
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