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Broken Butterfly
Contributed by
Insomnia_InfiniteSadness
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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long time away, i missed you YPDC
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My beautiful butterfly who flies so high has fallen to the ground
Her wings broken, and her heart crushed
I rush to aid, to put the pieces together; but I do not know where they fit
Will she ever be the same again?
I do all I can, hoping it is enough
But I feel my heart bleeds more than hers at the sight of her pain
I'm trying, but I fumble, making mistakes
When will it all be OK again?
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2004-07-30 13:12:54]
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Re: Broken Butterfly
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:40:35 PM AEST
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sad and beautiful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Broken Butterfly
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by Alina on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 02:39:21 PM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL WRITE!! Reminds me of an ex girlfriend for I called her Butterfly, but her problems were toomuch and I couldn't help her. This also makes me think of the wonders and tribulations of life. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! |
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Re: Broken Butterfly
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:53:17 PM AEST
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short,sweet, and oh so creative. an excellent write.keep em coming!
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Broken Butterfly
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:01:38 PM AEST
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A different write. Very good, I liked it alot.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Broken Butterfly
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:51:10 PM AEST
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| brilliant and excellent write. |
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Re: Broken Butterfly
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:51:14 PM AEST
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| brilliant and excellent write. |
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