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Childlike Emotions
Contributed by
julu
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:23:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The eminent cries of a troubled youth are gone unnoticed.
The disregarded emotions of a child in despair.
The unbearale guilt of a daughters failed existance.
the needy eyes of a juvinile searching for redemption.
The queer nature of a childs odd lifestyle.
The deception in ones artificial smile.
The masked face of an outcast striving for narmalcy.
The overlooked potential of a student in hiding.
The soul of a youth trapped in exhile.
The heart of a child concealed behind an iron wall.
The mislead emotions of a young lover.
The heartfelt screams of an undeveloped soul searching for affection.
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julu
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2004-07-30 13:23:42]
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Re: Childlike Emotions
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:48:15 PM AEST
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wow...excellent! the cool thing about this piece is there is no real begining or ending to it.brilliant work yet again.
keep it up
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Childlike Emotions
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:39:05 PM AEST
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| very true. good write. |
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