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broke up
Contributed by
kammie
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:25:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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falling slowly
your so clear
your smiling at my pain
your so near
you can touch me gently
you can hold me
but all along you knew
you could see
from the beginning
to the end
you said i was yours
now no love you send
it began with a kiss
it went onto better things
even though you hurt me
when your near my heart pings
i met you one night
we started as friends
we didnt think it could go wrong
we had imagined many ends
not a smile
just politness i get
i loved you or at least thought
i thought together we were set
im not angry with what you did
im not angry with what you said
you said you hated me
that i should be dead
please say you didnt mean it
and all will be forgotten
even your coldness to me
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kammie
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2004-07-30 13:25:16]
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Re: broke up
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 11:56:53 AM AEST
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Very strong composition. I hope things are looking up!
Kimberly :) |
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