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wishing
Contributed by
merry
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:16:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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wishing won't - won't come true
divine water from rocks
wine spills across my knees
tears become tangents
unavailable emotions
slink away to escape persecution
from your mouth - your eyes
give me shelter - storms gather
rolling thunder's random accusations
i fall victim to my blunder
told not to go - i went anyway
only to find out i was wrong
now i wish - but won't tell
wishes never come true
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merry
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2004-07-30 20:16:09]
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Re: wishing
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:26:41 PM AEST
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This obviously comes with a heavy dose of regret included... and it is heartbreaking because of that. Time will let you know what to do with regret - more often than not, it is to be tossed aside.
Beautiful as always, Merry-
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Re: wishing
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:34:08 PM AEST
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awww, so sad...... such a powerfully strong heartfelt poem.... big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: wishing
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:48:03 PM AEST
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Why is it I always feel I have lived your poems? Maybe not exactly, but at least lived the emotions. Ahhh, surely it's because they are so well written and convey so much in so few words.
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