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Burning in Flames
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:30:49 AM in AEST
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Burning in Flames
Burning till there's ashes
Trying to kill the past with matches
You cannot burn away
What was done today
What they had to say
Your life is in flames
You cannot burn the past
It will only come back
The pain will forever last
The past lives again
And makes you die within
You burn the ashes again
But you still feel it within
As it comes back again
The photos in your mind
Are still there within
Still causing pain inside
That will never mend
And you remember again
These images will never end
Your life is in flames to transcend
What you sought to find
Was a better life
The scars on your heart
Make you close yourself off
Burning in flames unable to forget
Afraid to be burned again by them
While you did it to yourself in the end
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Re: Burning in Flames
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by Gentledove on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:48:09 AM AEST
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Wow, such raw emotion. Don't beat yourself up too much. Good write.
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Re: Burning in Flames
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by venkat on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:07:51 AM AEST
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| It depicts such an emotional situation in ones life..captivating direct words from a heart..welldone.. venkat |
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Re: Burning in Flames
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by Dizza_13 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:33:42 AM AEST
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omg. this is soo like wat has happened 2 a friend. Thx 4 helpin me understand a little
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Re: Burning in Flames
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:52:16 AM AEST
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| painful write,so deep with emotion.Well done. |
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Re: Burning in Flames
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:29:45 AM AEST
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this is such an emotional and very raw poem...*hugs* a very moving piece
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Re: Burning in Flames
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:35:22 AM AEST
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Very interesting poem. You are a strong writer. good write.
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Re: Burning in Flames
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:13:02 PM AEST
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Wow! what an emotional poem...its amazing....great job....i loved it!!!!!
Lots of Love
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