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Love Unreturned
Contributed by
kyletycz
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:55:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She walks by so beautiful
In my head a never ending loop
With pictures of her in thought
My spirits never seem to droop
Her image emblazed in mind
Causes my breath to stop
When shes there
My heartbeat shall not drop
I know she thinks of me
I know she does care
But it seems like when she's arround
She'd rather not be there
I can't make it go away
I can't foget her
It makes life incoherent
It makes life a blur
I wish I could know
What she thinks of me
I wish I would know
If she thinks of me
Why must this be
Why is this so
In stories it all ends happy
This isn't a fairy tale though
Why can't she do it;
Return my feelings
Now thoughts of her
Leave me bleeding
With my soul exposed
My heart continues to bleed
Never to have the love returned
That it does need
Copyright ©
kyletycz
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2004-07-31 01:55:07]
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Re: Love Unreturned
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by venkat on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:21:58 AM AEST
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| Good poetry.. venkat |
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Re: Love Unreturned
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by emeraldeyes on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:56:33 AM AEST
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| so sad...nicely written. |
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Re: Love Unreturned
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 05:42:00 AM AEST
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Well done.... Lovely work...Best wishes.....
Jenni |
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Re: Love Unreturned
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:31:02 AM AEST
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It's good to poor you heart out, especially on paper. Very well written poem. take care!
Kimberly :) |
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