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Take away
Contributed by
trustisajoke
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:03:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Take away my life
take away my soul
take away everything ive lived for
and death comes knocking on my door
im trying to hold on
but my dreams are all gone
take away this knife it will cut me to the bone
take away these friends
and leave me all alone
take away these wishes
for they dont feel right
take away my tears
because they keep me up all night
take away this life
because it fills me with sadness
take away my lonelyness
for then i will be happy
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2004-07-31 08:03:55]
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Re: Take away
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:14:16 AM AEST
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A sad but good poem. I hope your feelings of being alone go away soon. take care.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Take away
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 11:15:04 AM AEST
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I can feel ur sadness... and ur pain... don't know what has happened to make u feel this way...
This is very well written... u express ur emotions well...
If u need someone to talk with... I'm here.. just PM me.
~Donna~
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Re: Take away
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by Holly573 on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 06:36:05 PM AEST
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| i love how you can put a story behind each line of this poem, i can easily relate to this. . |
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