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Nothings what it seems
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:39:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Lay me down right where I fell,
And where Ill fall again,
Embrace me now with the kiss of death,
And step away my friend,
Color blind by my own accord,
Blacks my chosen shade,
My Lord God brought me suffering
With every time I prayed,
Shadows rule the daylight,
And nightmares haunt my dreams,
People call me freak now,
And nothings what it seems,
Pleasure pours from slashing wrists,
Each drop gives my sight,
Flowing red bring life and death,
And finally it brings light.
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Re: Nothings what it seems
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:46:48 AM AEST
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One of the best "suicide" poems i've read on here. Even though I dislike these poems, I feel scared for you. I hope you can overcome whatever your struggle is.
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Re: Nothings what it seems
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:13:14 AM AEST
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I can relate to this very well, I truly hope that you find the strength to overcome it *hugs*
very emotional and sad write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Nothings what it seems
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:35:13 AM AEST
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a very sad emotional write. I can relate some what to this one.
Brandy |
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Re: Nothings what it seems
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:20:50 PM AEST
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well written. flows very nicely. i like the imagery and although i dont empathise fully, i sympathise.
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Re: Nothings what it seems
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by shorty_52 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 05:48:56 PM AEST
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this is really good. a nice flow, and u can almost see it happening in ur mind. great description, keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Nothings what it seems
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by Row on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 04:25:41 AM AEST
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| nice work loz |
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Re: Nothings what it seems
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:51:41 PM AEST
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I can relate so well to this poem...i hope you can stay strong and make it through this...great poem
Lots of Love
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