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I hate this world you left me in
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:31:33 PM in AEST
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I go for days sometimes
without you on my mind
but once your thought reappears
you put me in a bind
I still feel so much love
but I feel so much more hate
I dont know where to turn
or how much more I can take
I hate what you have done to me
I hate who I"ve become
I hate to feel so alone
I hate to feel so dumb
I hate that I believed in you
that I trusted you so much
I hate the way I still long
just to feel your touch
I hate the way I miss you
I hate it when I cry
I hate this world you left me in
things seem so awry
I hate to see the sun come up
and watch it set again
can never sleep, only weep
just remembering your sins
I hate this pain you left me with
burning deep inside
I hate the memories I have
and that I never got good-bye
I hate so much of my life
and what you forced me through
but what I hate the most
is still being in love with you
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holderofthestone
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:38:33 PM AEST
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Awwww Holder, not heard from you for awhile and what a poem to come back on, very sad and emotional write......
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:46:03 PM AEST
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Sad and heartfelt, but lovely flow.. Enjoyed it..
Jenni |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by slayer_015 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:47:37 PM AEST
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My first wife hurt me like this,so I can understand some of your pain.Awesome poem!
Brian |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 03:19:01 PM AEST
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This is very emotive and stunning.
I loved it
Very deep and real, just what i like
BS x |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:04:42 PM AEST
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How touching and honest. It was beautiful. Good luck...
J~ |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by storm_amoure on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:42:12 PM AEST
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| that was a great poem, i loved it. but it also didn't help my theory on "love sucks" i've been here before and it really does suck. |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:13:59 PM AEST
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fantastic write....i can relate...amazing job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:48:01 AM AEST
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wow chris, a beautiful flow and a very unique write I ejoyed and very much can relate as always...keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by MDodgen on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:08:14 PM AEST
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| wow, hope it wasn't me that hurt you. nice write. good images. |
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