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Breaking Apart
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 11:00:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Breaking Apart
You hate me
I am to blame
You can't forgive me
I was the cause
For all of this
What went wrong
Why we fell apart
You tried to break me
Into conforming
You tried to save me
From myself
You tried everything
I couldn't change myself
Not for anyone else
But I'm breaking apart
Because of myself
We fell apart
Because I couldn't be saved
All of this was in vain
I couldn't be broken away
To conform to you
In any way
But I'm breaking apart
More each day
You hate me
For never being
Someone else
When the price
Was you
I am to blame
For ever thinking
You could be better
Than this
The price I pay
For it
I am broken
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Essentially9
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2004-07-31 23:00:16]
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Re: Breaking Apart
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by ChinaRivera on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 11:07:01 PM AEST
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Aww, that poem was sweeeet. I liked it!
All i have to say is:
No ones heart is broken forever!
God picks up the pieces and puts it back together!
;-)
Much Love 2 ya! (-; |
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Re: Breaking Apart
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by nexxa on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:24:40 AM AEST
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sweet? Well it is a very good write but I wouldnt call it sweet I would call it thats what you get and I dont mean you wee one I mean anyone who pushes away the ones that love and care about that is what your poem says to me let me know if I am off topic lol it is very good I like it alot it seems to flow very smooth yet making a bold statement.
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Re: Breaking Apart
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by venkat on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:49:28 AM AEST
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Anguish of a loving heart touches the reader..
A heart felt write. venkat |
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Re: Breaking Apart
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:04:57 PM AEST
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great write...good job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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