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Centrifuge and Shame
Contributed by
TheSchroedmeister
on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:21:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Countless troubles,
Countless dreams,
Countless sorrows,
That always seem to
Feed on our hunger,
Gorge on our thirst.
Hate all our love, or
Revel in Hurt
Or even to whisper,
Everything will not be alright
When we think some of it will,
Or maybe all
Theyll waste no time
In finding a way to
Make a lost limb feel like two, or
To skew a sunrise into a sunset, or
Make cuts seem deeper,
Turn Waker to Sleeper,
Change giants to weepers,
And make We seem weaker
And no one knows why
Our Troubles and Dreams and Sorrows
Do these things, only that they do,
And knowing that there isnt just an
I,
but rather a
We,
A Universe seems only pebble,
An Eternity only seconds
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TheSchroedmeister
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2004-08-01 00:21:16]
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Re: Centrifuge and Shame
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by pixie on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:06:06 AM AEST
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a very good write :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Centrifuge and Shame
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:31:42 AM AEST
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Powerful write. I'm impressed with the final stanza, and your general capacity for rhyme.
Keep on writing, please! |
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