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°°°Soap & Shaving Cream°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Soap and Shaving Cream, almost alike You both are creamy, and both are white One washes our face, one lathers to shave Dirt and hair be gone, just go away You slide on our face, our necks, our chin We shave you away, wash the dirt again You go under our arms, some stinky i know But can't you see it's the hair that has to go? Dirt washed away, get off my skin Don't come back or i'll wash you again Soap, Shaving Cream where will you go On my legs? or on my toes? Scrubby to wash the soap in our skin Razor to make us all smooth again Soap and shaving cream almost the same If you get dirty and hairy, your the one to blame Have you ever wondered what Hero's use? Or movie stars, or tiny toon cartoons? Do they use soap or shaving cream? They need this to, so they'll be clean Soap and Shaving cream almost the same Sometimes i think they have the same name If you have smiled, i've kept this clean Soap and Shaving cream, make a good team
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Re: °°°Soap & Shaving Cream°°°
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:17:34 PM AEST (User
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Thanks for the smiles, OreO..... This reminded me of one time when my 6yr old cousin used shaving cream in a tube.. thinking it was toothpaste....he said it tasted yukky!!
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Re: °°°Soap & Shaving Cream°°°
(User Rating: 1 ) by viola on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:37:27 PM AEST (User
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ahh, good "clean" fun. you managed a smile, nicely done. |
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Re: °°°Soap & Shaving Cream°°°
(User Rating: 1 ) by unpredictable on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:49:28 AM AEST (User
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i like this poem, it made me smile. . .keep up to good work |
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Re: °°°Soap & Shaving Cream°°°
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkeyedman on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:44:41 PM AEST (User
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yep, this one made me smile too. sometimes we get trapped into thinking poetry must be such stern stuff. nice silly playful poem. |
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Re: °°°Soap & Shaving Cream°°°
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 02:37:14 PM AEST (User
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I like this one also Oreo. I am glad you put a smile on my face as I put one on yours (The Grinch That Stole Christmas). Glad you enjoyed it. *S* Cynthia |
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