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River of tears
Contributed by
babe-grl
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Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:41:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sometimes I think that this is only a bad dream Sometimes I wish that my tears could not be seen ButI always wake up and hear the beating of my broken heart Why was I so blind? Why was I ignoring it? I didnt want to see the real you I kept ignoring and ignoring I was too afraid I never thought that it would end this way When I first saw you I thought that youre the one But when I got to know you Ive realized that youre not for me I knew that we cant be There were so many fights I couldnt stand it. You kept telling me do this and do that You knew that Ive hated that. But I couldnt face you I was afraid I thought that I would die if youll leave me today A month has passed and here I am just sitting there and crying There were too many things to say but unfortunately we had no time left Too many questions I had but no one to answer. I used to sit there and cry wondering why? And now we went each on his way without saying a word And now all I have is the memory of your face and your hands holding me You used to hold me close to you You used to whisper in my ear that you will never leave me You promised By: Enas Z.
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Re: River of tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Monkeybones99 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:12:15 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed this poem keep up the good work. |
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Re: River of tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 11:11:02 AM AEST (User
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I can feel all your frustration, anger and a whirlpool of emotions in this
Well done
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Re: River of tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by mariano on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 04:37:23 PM AEST (User
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it was really nice... and as i like a poem to be... with absolutely no rhythm... you are very lucky for having all this inspiration as you grow up such as Nizar Qabbani and Fairuz... |
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