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A Humble Ending
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:50:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Let me rest in pieces.
Beneath the shallow willow tree.
Soak me in gasoline.
Light me with your ciggerette.
Give me the light I so desperatly need.
I dont want to feel anything anymore.
I give up you win.
Go away like all the other.
Your lie's they are my sheets.
They keep me warm.
Beneath the ground.
Where I was laid.
Where I remain.
One lonely paragraph sums me up.
I wont forget what you said.
This humble ending.
Dont seem so real after all.
My fingers scrap against the ground.
In the grave you dug for me.
I guess I wasnt so different after all.
I guess I cant tell a lie anymore.
I guess all the truth is in yours.
Everything has gone to hell.
I never get what I want anyway.
It keeps my secrets.
It marks my grave.
I hope the spring finds you well beneath the sheets.
Cause I'll be here beneath your flowers.
They keep me warm.
My heart is burning.
So I give up and you win.
I dont deserve this.
Oh well who am I trying to kid.
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Mortis-Dark
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2004-08-01 17:50:33]
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Re: A Humble Ending
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:07:56 AM AEST
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mortis this is great, vivid, moving, very well written, my new favorite of yours:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Humble Ending
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:02:58 AM AEST
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| Woah Mortis this is some poem, so much sadness and full of vivid images from beginning to end, awesome write. |
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