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My life
Contributed by
nickyboy
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Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:10:13 PM in AEST
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toughstuff
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The day of my first love was a day like no other. I was like the hunchback when he first meet isabella.
No one had showed me the love and compassion that she had. She was kind and pured hearted as they come.
One faithful day we had promissed each other that we be together forever. But then she took those words and
stabbed them into my heart. I was scarred to love, i was scarred to feal anything anymore. She tore everything
that was good to me out and through on the ground and spit on it. I will never forget her never.
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2004-08-01 21:10:13]
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Re: My life
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:54:02 PM AEST
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| despite grammar, very well written. =] makes sense to me. |
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