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Kill myself
Contributed by
dizza_13
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:56:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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All this pain,
I will not fight it anymore,
This is where it ends,
Now this time it has gone to far,
Ive been down this path before,
And now theres an open door.
Ill kill myself,
Ill cut myself til I have to crawl,
I will not take this anymore,
This is where it ends,
Tonight ill end my life.
Ill kill myself,
Ill blow my face onto the wall,
I will not take this anymore,
This is where it ends,
Tonight ill end my life.
Ill kill myself,
Ill jump right off and then Ill fall,
I will not take this anymore,
This is where it ends,
Tonight ill end my life.
Ill kill myself,
Ill drop my neck inside the noose,
I will not take this anymore,
This is where it ends,
Tonight ill end my life.
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Re: Kill myself
(User Rating: 1 )
by Row on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:10:18 AM AEST
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| DYLAAAAN! |
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Re: Kill myself
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by Gothik_Twitch on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:18:30 AM AEST
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| I love this. ifeel exactly like it |
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Re: Kill myself
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by cj_ranson on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:51:37 AM AEST
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i agree with rowan DYYLAAN!! lol
nah not bad
quite sikening but good writing keep it up but without the knives next time lol
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Re: Kill myself
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by corrupted_minds on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:27:30 AM AEST
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(tear).. good work dylan love it once again. yet i do wish Rowan would right a serious comment sometime. Good Work.
Love always
xoxoxo |
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Re: Kill myself
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:04:09 AM AEST
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| ItS bRiLlIaNt! |
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Re: Kill myself
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:19:51 AM AEST
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| Good poem! I feel like doing that 2. |
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Re: Kill myself
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:25:54 PM AEST
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I know how you feel...i can relate...good job at expressing the pain...excellent write...good job
Lots of Love
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