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Bliss
Contributed by
cj_ranson
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:37:13 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Bliss
This feeling of bliss
So clear and true
Now im happy
So full of glee
This feeling, I feel so free
I escaped from the burning tongues of fire
Forever, I will only get higher
You cant have what ive got
Because your too late
Hell has already engulfed you
Satan takes you to where you cant go back
You have gone so far and deep
Like you were nothing
Now your his to keep
To the deepest ends of hell
His haunting call will forever dwell
His burning grip is always ever fasting
But You can turn the other way
And now this bliss is ever lasting
Most people give in
The darkness swallows their souls
They take a knife
And take their life
They cant handle this journey
Too hard, too sad
Always wishing they got what they had
Lost spirits, trying to find a home
These forgotten lands, they will forever roam
Never finding the gates of heaven
Never finding Gods home of angels
This Bliss so clear and true
Nothing can touch my heart of steel
You cant hurt me no matter how much you want too
My spirit is like a Hurricane
Never do I feel hurt nor do I feel pain
So much power
So much love
Nothing I have could be sold
Coz too me its all made of Gold
I hope one day
You will be with me
And you can feel this eternal flame
This Bliss, this Happiness
When my angel finally came
O this bliss
It burns in me like a disease
This bliss will only ever please
This will never end
Like love, it cannot bend
It was too easy
So it can only get better
Bliss
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Re: Bliss
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by corrupted_minds on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:40:57 AM AEST
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A hidden talent CJ. That's really touching.. to see anothers view of life. It's really... sorry speechless. I just didnt know you could write. Keep it up seriously!! i'm forcing you too your great!
Love always
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Re: Bliss
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:45:49 AM AEST
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Never under estimate your writing a gain. Your talent is unique to say the least.
Good writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Bliss
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by Row on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:52:31 AM AEST
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| w00t SEAN!!!! MOTHER MY CHILDREN!!! |
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Re: Bliss
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:01:06 AM AEST
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yes I agree dont underestimate your writing it is so beautifully powerful and filled with so much emotion I loved every word of it...please please keep it up and keep it coming...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Bliss
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:02:57 AM AEST
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GO SEAN!! man u rock. Ur like pro! Great work man. I'll give it a shot being less "sick". Keep em comin
Dizza |
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Re: Bliss
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by Gothik_Twitch on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:31:32 AM AEST
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| Gotta admit i like the hell parts. I hope one day you will live like us. The dark poets of this forbidden earth. You shall have someting happen and your life will change for the worst. |
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