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Still only a friend
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:53:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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He writes a poem about love,
Words of beauty are spoken,
The poems about another girl,
And with this thought Im broken,
He tells me that he loves her,
And needs her or hell die,
I hold myself together,
Even though I want to cry,
I tell him theres more like her,
Shes not one of a kind,
His the perfect guy,
So she wont be hard to find,
I wish I could tell him,
Just how I feel at heart,
I feel like the worlds going to end,
Whenever were apart,
I know I have to do whats best,
And never let my feelings out,
Keep it to myself, and quietly die,
And be alone without a doubt,
Eternity is taking me on a joy ride,
I tried to make it end,
To many years are wasted
And Im still just only a friend,
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2004-08-02 05:53:11]
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Re: Still only a friend
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by cj_ranson on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:04:48 AM AEST
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jeez thats reel good loretta, keep em up
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Re: Still only a friend
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:06:17 AM AEST
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Great work
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Re: Still only a friend
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by n2dep2care on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:25:17 AM AEST
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Wow, very powerful - the last line especially kicked me in the gut. VERY well done. Bravo!
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Re: Still only a friend
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by hopelessromantic on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:56:49 PM AEST
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| I really really related to your poem please keep writing u are great. |
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