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poem for Krista
Contributed by
toni
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:10:08 PM in AEST
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aug 6, 1993
The astral world of intentions
does a slow dance around my heart
reminding me of everyone ive ever
danced with,
to the never ending tune of
It aint me babe
the resonance of Laurie Andersons voice,
penetrates my body,
whispering
hey..is anybody home?
the magnitude of Patricias love for
mother meera
makes me wonder
who..oooo
is loving me ....
the pink of Kristas heart
floods my soul with God,
while the universal lightshow simultaneously displays itself.
the elf of my mind
appears as if she understands,
as i spin off to territory i am compelled to remember.
recordings of linear time inculcate my destiny.
trails of trickster remains,
fortify the mirror,
while the glasscutter of truth is slicing the veils,
exposing me to eternal considerations.
Copyright ©
toni
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2004-08-02 12:10:08]
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Re: poem for Krista
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by Kie on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:22:08 PM AEST
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Oh WOW!
I believe this is the first poem I have read of yours and I was ecstatic, for you do have a way with words.
This is a GREAT poem.
The way you wrote this is a style so unique that you are going to do great here!
Kie |
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Re: poem for Krista
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by 03614 on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:44:25 PM AEST
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nice poem, thanks for sharing
It's a really beautiful poem, an amazing one! |
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Re: poem for Krista
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by sheri on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:29:25 PM AEST
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| A beautiful piece, well done........ |
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Re: poem for Krista
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by jeannoh on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 03:25:26 PM AEST
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I like the way you use your words
very nice poem
keep writing
Jeannoh |
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