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To Fly
Contributed by
BlazeingHeart
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:35:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As I rise
The ground falls away
Toes topple pebbles
The winds like a slap in the face
I grasp at clouds but they slip past
I race a flock of gease
And a diving sparrow zips by
And oh,
What a terrific feeling it is to fly
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2004-08-02 12:35:42]
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Re: To Fly
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:37:02 PM AEST
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| I like this, Well done. |
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Re: To Fly
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:37:39 PM AEST
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'I grasp at clouds but they slip past'
I love that line.
Oh to be able to fly...what a dream.
I love this poem, its short, but cute.
Great write,
Phil xxx
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Re: To Fly
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by ExoticDreamer on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:42:18 PM AEST
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| Wish I could fly. You have exhibited your delight in the thought quite well in this verse. Well done. ~Pam |
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