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Awakening
Contributed by
ExoticDreamer
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Awakening
Melancholy moments linger;
fading into the soft music
that beckons the night dance.
Heartfelt romance wanes
as breathtaking aura of white
befalls this silent vigil.
Lonely poisoned morsel
buries into the shallow grave,
built from hands that have carried too much.
Fallen branches breaking
as heart pieces of faith crumble.
Dim grows the light of hope.
Laughter evanesces silent
upon the moment of this awakening;
ripe with the stench of betrayal.
Awareness looms complacent
as the need to carry on survives;
serenity no longer distant.
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ExoticDreamer
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2004-08-02 12:40:30]
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Re: Awakening
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:36:42 PM AEST
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Another well written poem. I liked the essence of this. well done.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Awakening
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:11:21 AM AEST
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| There are some lines in this verse that are so heartbreaking then you lift our spirits with "Serenity no longer distant." Beautifully written piece. |
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