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Please Don't Leave Me Here
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Please dont die & leave me here,
Who will be there to dry my tear?
Please dont leave me here alone,
I need to hear your warming tone.
You & I should never part,
As it would undo my precious heart,
I would lose my will to carry on,
I never want to hear that you are gone.
If you died then my soul would follow suit,
Id never replace you with a substitute,
Willingly I would come with you,
Please open the gates & let me through.
I would miss you oh so much,
Forever longing to feel your touch,
But you would be in a far away land,
Never again to be close at hand.
Please dont leave or go away,
By my side is where I want you to stay,
I couldnt survive without my very best friend,
Please say youll stay with me until the end?
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pixie
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2004-08-02 14:00:57]
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Re: Please Don't Leave Me Here
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by loopylou on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:16:19 PM AEST
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| this is so pretty full of emotion. please be strong, i really liked this |
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Re: Please Don't Leave Me Here
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:18:06 PM AEST
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awww... so sweet:) may you have many many long wonderfully happy healthy years with your love, hugs n' love nessa
@->.->:- |
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Re: Please Don't Leave Me Here
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by kammie on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:21:07 PM AEST
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its a very precious and delicate poem i really liked this one pixie!
hope your ok
xx kammie xx |
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Re: Please Don't Leave Me Here
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by Alina on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:40:19 PM AEST
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Very good write.... I love all the poems you write so far.... you are a very good poet. This poem makes me think of how I feel if ever lost my mother. Keep up the good work.
(((HUGS))) |
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Re: Please Don't Leave Me Here
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by Lost_Shadow on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:20:39 PM AEST
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| I know it might not count for much but I lost my dog. I felt lost for a while when she had to be put down. Maybe in a way I can kind of relate to this. |
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Re: Please Don't Leave Me Here
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by Rachelle on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:45:40 PM AEST
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This poem was really touching. Cuz I have a best friend who has been there for me through EVERYTHING and I have no idea what I'd do if she wasn't here by my side. Great Poem.
~Chelle~ |
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Re: Please Don't Leave Me Here
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:02:07 PM AEST
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This one just opened the flood gates for me.
Do you remember the song entitled-"If you ever leave me, won't you take me with you?"
Your poem doesn't bear a resemblence to it but it just brought the song to my mind.
Very talented you are Pixie.
Kie |
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Re: Please Don't Leave Me Here
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:13:51 AM AEST
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Aww how sad and emotional ...
Very well written poem..
Hope alls well with you.
take care..
hugs |
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