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be with me forever
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:15:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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you say u want to be together forever
so why are you leaving me
i never thought we would fall this deep
i never thought i would have to endure this pain
my tears are flowing
my mascara is running
as i stare at this sad sight in the mirror
your so confusing
you end our relationship
but still you say how much you love me
you say your leaving
but if you have your way we will be together for the rest of our lives
now my tears have stopped flowing
but the aching in my chest keeps pounding
dont find anyone else in your new home
please stll love me
be w/ me forever
together
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2004-08-02 14:15:15]
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Re: be with me forever
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:25:31 PM AEST
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I wish you all the best here..It's always difficult when one has to be separated...
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Re: be with me forever
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:12:28 PM AEST
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Long distance relationships are very tough (speaking from experience) He is doing this for your own good, trust me. Just chalk it up to the distance... if it was meant to be, it'll be.
Very good write!
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Re: be with me forever
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 11:20:44 PM AEST
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This is soo sad...im soo sorry...but this si a great write
Lost of Love
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