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Trapped
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:36:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Floating in the void, no way out. You scream, but it is a mere whisper. You struggle, but only hang in darkness. They can't see, and you can't show them. You feel like you're dying, fading, ceasing to exist. The pain grows like a wound slowly opening. Your heart grows heavier and emtier. Close your hand, touch mine. Feel that someone is near. Know you're not alone. There are many here if you look past it all. Remember, we'll be here when called upon, if it is today, or an eternity from now.
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2004-08-02 14:36:44]
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Re: Trapped
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:44:20 PM AEST
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It is short, but it is a captivating write. Great piece!
Kimerly :) |
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Re: Trapped
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by kyletycz on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:38:09 PM AEST
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| nice write, i liked it ALOT..... |
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Re: Trapped
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:55:36 PM AEST
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The "trapped" feeling is a feeling that I'm sure everyone can relate to. I really liked your poem, you are a very talented writer.
Katie |
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Re: Trapped
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:12:42 PM AEST
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| its a nice write i can relate to it thank you xgripx |
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