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Lost In My Thoughts..
Contributed by
Babigurl
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:02:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I feel so heavy I can't move,
Lieing in my bed almost dead,
Blood trickles down my arm,
Its so hard not to harm,
Tears rolling down my cheeks,
Feels like I just fell from one of the highest peaks,
Nobody understands the pain on my arm fom all those weeks,
My life is soon to be over,
I am anything but solver...
By:Nicole Vassallo
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Babigurl
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2004-08-02 15:02:56]
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Re: Lost In My Thoughts..
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by Kie on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:12:35 PM AEST
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I wish I could type words to somehow ease all the pain trapped inside of you.
You have found a place (at ypdc) filled with genuine people who do care about others.
If the time comes and you would like for someone to listen, please let me know.
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Re: Lost In My Thoughts..
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:13:53 AM AEST
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| hey, it sucks to not know if anybody really does care, i know how you feel there, people keep saying they care, but no one every seems to show that fact, ill tell you my biggest fear in life is to die and nobody cares, its something i think we all fear, but its something we have to cope with, and do our best to leave a good imprint on everybody's lives that we come into contact with, if you are posotive, people notice alot more of what you do and who you are, keep up the good work |
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