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Have you ever...
Contributed by
Lost_Shadow
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:37:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Have you ever felt the world come to an end?
No more will to live?
A lack of will to end yourself?
One moment, one plea?
A never ending story?
Have you ever felt time stand still?
Around someone you like?
Around the one you love?
When you think that there is no-one?
When you are in pure ecstasy?
Have you ever considered on finding that one?
To fulfill your life?
To make you whole?
To share the good times and the bad?
To hold?
Have you ever known where you stood?
Where you wanna go in life?
What opportunities you hold?
Who sees you all the time?
When you know nothing can go wrong?
Have you ever?
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Re: Have you ever...
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:43:32 PM AEST
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I guess at some point in my life I have felt a few of those emotions.... and many of us I believe can relate to it...
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Re: Have you ever...
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:42:45 PM AEST
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Stimulating write. And yes I have! Thankyou for posting this. Makes one sit and think...
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Re: Have you ever...
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by Kie on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:00:05 PM AEST
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Well I could talk all day and night on this topic but i'll spare you the ramblings.
YES, yes yes yes yes Ummm yes I have.
This is a very unique poem that has so much depth.
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Re: Have you ever...
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:19:11 AM AEST
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do i seriously have to answer all of those questions, haha, get it...........(akward silence)..... ok, so you dont.......anyway.......(more silence)...........(crickets chirping)..........yah, good write, too bad my comedy isnt up to par in comparison....
l8r
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