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Lonely Staricase
Contributed by
WestCPunk
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:41:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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These stairs have so much history
All scuffed up and dirty
A place where kids would hang out and play hookey
But then something happened
Everyone felt frightened
It's not impossible to get nightmares
Just from walking on these stairs
Shadows crawl behind you
It almost seems as if it's true
The scary stories that they've told you
There are no misconceptions
These stairs hold so many unwanted emotions
It was such a gloomy day
Revenge unravelled through this very walkway
A cold blooded murder
Vanished without a trace
And it all happened
On this lonely staircase
Copyright ©
WestCPunk
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2004-08-02 15:41:32]
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Re: Lonely Staricase
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:39:50 PM AEST
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Very dark and believable. Excellent poem. I love the picture.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Lonely Staricase
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:06:00 PM AEST
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This poem is awesome. Those stairs do look like they have something haunting them. I like this a lot, nice work!
Katie |
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Re: Lonely Staricase
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:54:09 PM AEST
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Very nice...great write
Lots of Love
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Re: Lonely Staricase
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:46:23 AM AEST
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| beautifull written, with so many haunted emotions, awesome. |
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