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Creature of the Night
Contributed by
BlazeingHeart
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:41:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Blood coats my tongue
Teeth bite deep
Eyes close in ecstacy
Arms hold my pray to me
A groan escapes
I release the man
And let him fall to the ground
Wipe my mouth with my sleeve
A single drop drikkles from his wound
I casually lick it off his neck
Watch the life leave his body
I feel only warmpth
I am a creature of the night.
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BlazeingHeart
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2004-08-02 16:41:50]
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Re: Creature of the Night
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by Stew on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:12:36 PM AEST
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I love the poem, however i wish there were more because i think you could make it more.... fantasy like read some of mine.
Love Forever
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Re: Creature of the Night
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by MomentInTime on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:33:51 PM AEST
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hmmmmmm would it be safe to run into you in a dark alley? lol
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