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Voices
Contributed by
kyletycz
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:22:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I walk through the shadows
Only to see the blackest light
My mind is a never ending fog
Accentuated by the night
These people, these voices
They give me many orders
They whisper and they scream
They cris cross borders
I scream back and try not to listen
I hear them and quickly turn arround
But they are never there
They are never to be found
I try to make them go away
I speak of them to others
But they just stare and wonder
So I must keep this secret covered
So I sit in my home, all alone
The voices keep screaming till I hear
Their ever so maddening shrieks
Untill reality is no longer clear
Are we all like this
Can this really be
Or am I forgeting
If Im really me
So I seem to forget
When no one is here
That I still talk to people
Who's silhouets are ever so clear
My mind keeps degrating
People try to bring me aid
But people don't seem to realize
All I get from them is pain
The voices give me clues
The voices show me a solution
They help me rid my life
Of every type of pollution
I walk to the closet
Where I have kept my gun
No need for someone to hide
No need for someone to run
I dont need to take this
I've had enough
These voices made me insane
These voices are too much
Im loading my revolver
One bullet at a time
Five for the voices
But the first one is mine
I open my mouth and close my eyes
I am ready for this heavenly surprise
The barrel oh so cold
My mind has lost realitys hold
I hope the voices are sent to hell
Those voices that made me unwell
I worry not though
To heaven I shall go
I squeeze oh so tight
These voices I shall smite
Suddenly its all goes white
Finnally, I shall be allright
Copyright ©
kyletycz
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2004-08-02 18:22:33]
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Re: Voices
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by Cursed_Witch on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:32:58 PM AEST
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| gooood write, i love it :) alot of us share the same ideas... keep it up |
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Re: Voices
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:39:48 PM AEST
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I can definitely relate to the voices part. You just have to be stronger than them. This was a very well written poem. I liked it a lot.
Katie |
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Re: Voices
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by badboyzlover on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:08:03 PM AEST
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| This is a really great write. Good work. Keep it up! |
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Re: Voices
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by Terry on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:12:09 PM AEST
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| That poem, to me, is scary as it shows the reality of suicide and the false belief that they will go to Heaven afterwards. The vivid detail is really good. |
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