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The Road to You
Contributed by
thebirdman
on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The road is long
The lights are out
Reaching my destination seems hopeless
But I persist
The metaphorical pot of gold is what I seek
If I can seize it from the leprechaun who holds it dearly
The road is filled with speed bumps
Each hoping to slow me down in my conquest
During my journey, other more clear cut paths emerge
But I stay on this road
As soon as I get a glimps of my pot of gold
I see the leprechaun grasping my treasure
Toying with me
His grip is tight
I think about turning away but the glow of the gold is very inviting.
So here I stand and the end of the road with my last chance at you.
Should I take it?
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2002-10-29 23:00:00]
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Re: The Road to You
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by baby_bee on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 11:55:02 PM AEST
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So here I stand and the end of the road with my last chance at you.
Should I take it?
In my opinion, those two lines are the best of the poem. I'm in that same situation right now, so I totally relate to this. Good write. |
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Re: The Road to You
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:14:13 AM AEST
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Great write
I like the part that says
Reaching my destination
seems hopeless
I've felt that way so many
times, Keep em 'coming
I liked reading this alot
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: The Road to You
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by ChristopherFriedrich on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:11:26 AM AEST
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| Nice write. The symbolism reminds me of life itself. |
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