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Strong for you, Strong for me
Contributed by
badboyzlover
on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:53:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I took care of you,
When no one else would.
I was so scared,
I didnt know what to do.
I didnt understand,
What was happening to you.
All I saw was pain,
When I looked into your eyes.
On the outside, I tried to make you think I was strong,
But on the inside, I was weak.
I had to be strong,
Because you needed to be strong.
I lived in a fantasy world sometimes,
That I created to escape the pain.
I had to stop being strong for you
And be strong for me.
At least for a little while.
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2004-08-02 18:53:59]
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Re: Strong for you, Strong for me
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:04:26 PM AEST
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I like this poem a lot, you have a real talent, it's hard to be strong for yourself and another. Good luck.
Katie |
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Re: Strong for you, Strong for me
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by zenmind on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:27:40 PM AEST
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| I can see that you were being honest in this poem. Good job describing what you tried to present yourself to be (being strong) while also describing what you were feeling inside. |
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