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Left Me
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:52:27 PM in AEST
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I watch you as you wave goodbye
Now I really begin to cry
You left me here, on my own
I wish that I had only known
You hurt me so bad
It didnt even make you sad
I thought you cared about me
But now I really see
That I meant nothing to you
There was nothing I wouldnt do
I would have lost my blood
Now my tears begin to flood
I cant believe the pain I feel
My insides are beginning to peel
Falling apart from the inside out
You have filled me with so much doubt
Now I dont trust anyone
This pain will never be undone
You left me wounded and all alone
Ive now gone into a different zone
I cant concentrate anymore
Im now more depressed then ever before
I dont think I will ever heal
Oh, I wish this pain, you could feel
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Re: Left Me
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by anonymussme on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:55:39 PM AEST
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great poem.
hope you feel better soon. |
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Re: Left Me
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:00:03 AM AEST
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I suppose no words can really make you immediately feel better, but then again it's not natural to recuperate from such an ordeal so quickly. But only know that you mean a lot to someone, and that your pain will find an end in one of your experiences.
Lovely piece, I hope you keep sharing |
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Re: Left Me
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:20:12 AM AEST
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I know the heartbreak feeling. It is so painful . This was a very good poem. Keep it up. I hope all goes well and in time you can look back at this time in your life and think " it just made me a better and stronger person."
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Re: Left Me
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:21:06 AM AEST
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| hey, dont wory about it bud, just dont do like a friend of mine did when she broke up with her boyfriend, and she was heartbroken for about 3 days, then she started becoming a major slut and hitting on anything that looks like a guy, thats not a good thing when that happens, but back to the ranch, nice poem, i liked it alot..... l8r... |
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