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rise and fall
Contributed by
dizza_13
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:12:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Highs in life are bliss,
As sweet as loves first kiss,
But falling down will brake and burn,
Your life and soul,
This you are yet to learn.
The higher we rise,
The further we fall.
Torn apart and dumped in the sea,
Is what it feels like to be me,
Crimson tears shinning bright,
Will bring you down without a fight.
The higher we rise,
The further we fall.
The pain of someone you hold dear,
Will bring to life your greatest fears,
For those are which that I have felt,
A friend in need you cannot help.
The higher we rise,
The further we fall.
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dizza_13
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2004-08-03 04:12:13]
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Re: rise and fall
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:16:46 AM AEST
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Nice write once again.
love always
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Re: rise and fall
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 05:35:58 AM AEST
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I thought this was an excellent interesting write. Very sad and full of emotion, touching words. I enjoyed the read thanks for sharing. Look forward to reading more of your stuff.
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Re: rise and fall
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by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 07:42:09 AM AEST
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sad but very interesting. great job and thanks for sharing this amazing poem.
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Re: rise and fall
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by hooray_its_jen on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:05:09 PM AEST
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Very sad, I like how you repeated that line though.
The higher we rise,
The further we fall.
Well done, a great write!
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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