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BLACK AND BLUE
Contributed by
wellsmark
on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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BLACK AND BLUE
He hates me and the clothes I wear,
He shouts and pulls at my shinny hair.
Tea on the plate, beer on the table,
My life is hell and Im disabled.
My hobbies are gone and my nick-knacks too,
If Im seen near them hell hit me black and blue.
On my own locked between four walls,
I cant even answer when my friends knock or call.
I think about freeing my lonely soul,
All this misery has taken its toll.
But I am week and cant end my hell,
Locked away in a shattered shell.
Please control your anger; control your fists,
Remember the first time we met and kissed.
Copyright ©
wellsmark
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2002-10-30 03:40:00]
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Re: BLACK AND BLUE
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:44:22 AM AEST
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I can relate to this so well
Just remember your better
than to allow someone to hit
you, Great write this really
hit home with me
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: BLACK AND BLUE
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 08:05:36 AM AEST
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Well I think you need to get tough & get out!!!
Sad poetry I feel for you! Christina |
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Re: BLACK AND BLUE
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 09:40:41 AM AEST
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this reminds me of how my mom used to be...
this is a really meaningfull, and great great write...
Ali |
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